CANTO IIII

To sinfull house of Pride, Duessa
2 guides the faithfull knight,
Where brothers death to wreak Sansioy
4 doth chalenge him to fight.

1 To sinful House of Pride Duessa 2 guides the faithful knight; 3 Where, brother's death to wreak, Sansjoy

wreak > avenge

4 does challenge him to fight.

104.1

YOung knight, what euer that dost armes professe,
2 And through long labours huntest after fame,
Beware of fraud, beware of ficklenesse,
4 In choice, and change of thy deare loued Dame,
Least thou of her beleeue too lightly blame,
6 And rash misweening doe thy hart remoue:
For vnto knight there is no greater shame,
8 Then lightnesse and inconstancie in loue;
That doth this Redcrosse knights ensample plainly proue.

1 Young knight, whatever that do arms profess,

whatever that > whoever [you are] that arms > feats of arms profess > lay claim to, pretend to

2 And through long labours hunt after fame, 3 Beware of fraud, beware of fickleness,

fraud > faithlessness

4 In choice, and change of your dear-loved dame, 5 Lest you of her believe too lightly blame,

blame > accusation, charge; blame

6 And, rash misweening, do your heart remove:

rash misweening > rashly misunderstanding

7 For to knight there is no greater shame 8 Than lightness and inconstancy in love; 9 That does this Redcross Knight's example plainly prove.

104.2

Who after that he had faire Vna lorne,
2 Through light misdeeming of her loialtie,
And false Duessa in her sted had borne,
4 Called Fidess', and so supposd to bee;
Long with her traueild, till at last they see
6 A goodly building, brauely garnished,
The house of mightie Prince it seemd to bee:
8 And towards it a broad high way that led,
All bare through peoples feet, which thither traueiled.

1 Who, after he had fair Una forlorn,

forlorn > lost; left, forsaken (catachr.)

2 Through light misdeeming of her loyalty,

misdeeming > misjudgement

3 And false Duessa in her stead had borne,

borne > taken as a companion

4 Called "Fidessa", and so supposed to be; 5 Long with her travelled, till at last they see 6 A goodly building, bravely garnished,

goodly > fine, beautiful bravely garnished > splendidly adorned

7 The house of mighty prince it seemed to be: 8 And towards it a broad highway that led,

broad highway > (See Matt. 7.13)

9 All bare through people's feet, which thither travelled.

people's feet, which > [the feet of people who]

104.3

Great troupes of people traueild thitherward
2 Both day and night, of each degree and place,
But few returned, hauing scaped hard,
4 With balefull beggerie, or foule disgrace,
Which euer after in most wretched case,
6 Like loathsome lazars, by the hedges lay.
Thither Duessa bad him bend his pace:
8 For she is wearie of the toilesome way,
And also nigh consumed is the lingring day.

1 Great troops of people travelled thitherward

thitherward > towards there, thither

2 Both day and night, of each degree and place,

place > rank

3 But few returned, having scaped hard,

scaped hard > escaped with difficulty

4 With baleful beggary, or foul disgrace,

baleful > deadly, miserable

5 Which ever after, in most wretched case,

case > plight

6 Like loathsome lazars, by the hedges lay.

lazars > lepers

7 Thither Duessa bade him bend his pace:

bend > incline; turn, hence: divert (including sense of "diverting from the true path")

8 For she is weary of the toilsome way,

toilsome > wearisome

9 And also nigh consumed is the lingering day.

104.4

A stately Pallace built of squared bricke,
2 Which cunningly was without morter laid,
Whose wals were high, but nothing strong, nor thick,
4 And golden foile all ouer them displaid,
That purest skye with brightnesse they dismaid:
6 High lifted vp were many loftie towres,
And goodly galleries farre ouer laid,
8 Full of faire windowes, and delightfull bowres;
And on the top a Diall told the timely howres.

1 A stately palace built of squared brick, 2 Which cunningly was without mortar laid, 3 Whose walls were high, but nothing strong, nor thick,

nothing > not at all, in no way

4 And golden foil all over them displayed, 5 That purest sky with brightness they dismayed:

That > [So that the]

6 High lifted up were many lofty towers, 7 And goodly galleries far over laid,

goodly > fine, beautiful far over laid > placed high above

8 Full of fair windows, and delightful bowers;

bowers > chambers, rooms

9 And on the top a dial told the timely hours.

104.5

It was a goodly heape for to behould,
2 And spake the praises of the workmans wit;
But full great pittie, that so faire a mould
4 Did on so weake foundation euer sit:
For on a sandie hill, that still did flit,
6 And fall away, it mounted was full hie,
That euery breath of heauen shaked it:
8 And all the hinder parts, that few could spie,
Were ruinous and old, but painted cunningly.

1 It was a goodly heap to behold,

goodly > fine, beautiful heap > pile; hence: large building

2 And spoke the praises of the workman's wit;

wit > skill

3 But full great pity, that so fair a mould

full > very, exceedingly mould > form, structure

4 Did on so weak foundation ever sit:

so > such [a]

5 For on a sandy hill, that still did flit

still > continually flit > yield, crumble (see Matt. 7.26-7)

6 And fall away, it mounted was full high,

full > very, exceedingly

7 That every breath of heaven shook it:

That > [So that]

8 And all the hinder parts, that few could spy, 9 Were ruinous and old, but painted cunningly.

104.6

Arriued there they passed in forth right;
2 For still to all the gates stood open wide,
Yet charge of them was to a Porter hight
4 Cald Maluen{u\}, who entrance none denide:
Thence to the hall, which was on euery side
6 With rich array and costly arras dight:
Infinite sorts of people did abide
8 There waiting long, to win the wished sight
Of her, that was the Lady of that Pallace bright.

1 Arrived there, they passed in forthright;

forthright > straightway; directly forward

2 For still to all the gates stood open wide,

still > ever, continually

3 Yet charge of them was to a porter hight,

hight > committed, entrusted (SUS)

4 Called Malven{u\}, who entrance none denied:

Malven{u\} > "Ill-welcome"; "Welcome to Evil"

5 Thence to the hall, which was on every side 6 With rich array and costly arras dight:

arras > {Tapestry wall-hanging, screen} dight > decked

7 Infinite sorts of people did abide

sorts > kinds; companies

8 There waiting long, to win the wished sight 9 Of her, that was the lady of that palace bright.

104.7

By them they passe, all gazing on them round,
2 And to the Presence mount; whose glorious vew
Their frayle amazed senses did confound:
4 In liuing Princes court none euer knew
Such endlesse richesse, and so sumptuous shew;
6 Ne Persia selfe, the nourse of pompous pride
Like euer saw. And there a noble crew
8 Of Lordes and Ladies stood on euery side,
Which with their presence faire, the place much beautifide.

1 By them they pass, all gazing on them round,

round > from all sides

2 And to the presence mount; whose glorious view

presence > presence-chamber (where a sovereign receives guests) view > appearance

3 Their frail amazed senses did confound:

frail > {Weak; morally weak, unable to resist temptation}

4 In living prince's court none ever knew 5 Such endless richesse, and so sumptuous show;

richesse > opulence so sumptuous > such sumptuous; such a sumptuous; so sumptuous a

6 Nor Persia herself, the nurse of pompous pride, 7 Like ever saw. And there a noble crew 8 Of lords and ladies stood on every side, 9 Who, with their presence fair, the place much beautified.

104.8

High aboue all a cloth of State was spred,
2 And a rich throne, as bright as sunny day,
On which there sate most braue embellished
4 With royall robes and gorgeous array,
A mayden Queene, that shone as Titans ray,
6 In glistring gold, and peerelesse pretious stone:
Yet her bright blazing beautie did assay
8 To dim the brightnesse of her glorious throne,
As enuying her selfe, that too exceeding shone.

1 High above all a cloth of state was spread,

cloth of state > {Baldachin, canopy suspended on pillars above throne}

2 And a rich throne, as bright as sunny day, 3 On which there sat, most brave embellished

brave > splendidly

4 With royal robes and gorgeous array, 5 A maiden queen, that shone as Titan's ray,

that > who (if the pronoun refers to Lucifera rather than the throne; the intention is not entirely clear) Titan > (The sun personified. In this context the name also brings to mind the Titans, who sought to dethrone Zeus (Jove); they are synonymous with rebellion and the overthrow of order. And the phrase "Titans ray" prepares the reader for a description of Phaethon in the next stanza)

6 In glistering gold and peerless precious stone: 7 Yet her bright blazing beauty did essay

essay > attempt

8 To dim the brightness of her glorious throne, 9 As envying herself, that too exceeding shone.

104.9

Exceeding shone, like Ph{oe}bus fairest childe,
2 That did presume his fathers firie wayne,
And flaming mouthes of steedes vnwonted wilde
4 Through highest heauen with weaker hand to rayne;
Proud of such glory and aduancement vaine,
6 While flashing beames do daze his feeble eyen,
He leaues the welkin way most beaten plaine,
8 And rapt with whirling wheeles, inflames the skyen,
With fire not made to burne, but fairely for to shyne.

1 Exceeding shone, like Phoebus' fairest child,

Phoebus' fairest child > (Phaethon, son of Phoebus Apollo [Titan], who took his father's chariot and set the world on fire: killed by Jupiter with a thunderbolt. See 311.38, Met. 2.1 ff.)

2 That did presume his father's fiery wain

presume > usurp wain > chariot

3 And flaming mouths of steeds, unwonted wild

mouths > [control] unwonted > unaccustomedly, unusually (referring to Phaethon's handling of the reins)

4 Through highest heaven with weaker hand to rein;

weaker > too-weak; or: weaker (than his father's hand) rein > (Or reign; a typically Spenserian pun)

5 Proud of such glory and advancement vain, 6 While flashing beams do daze his feeble eyes, 7 He leaves the welkin way most beaten plain,

welkin > {Sky, skyey, heavenly; welkin way: the sun's path through the sky}

8 And, rapt with whirling wheels, inflames the skies

rapt > carried away, enraptured

9 With fire not made to burn, but fairly to shine.

fairly > gently, entirely, properly

104.10

So proud she shyned in her Princely state,
2 Looking to heauen; for earth she did disdayne,
And sitting high; for lowly she did hate:
4 Lo vnderneath her scornefull feete, was layne
A dreadfull Dragon with an hideous trayne,
6 And in her hand she held a mirrhour bright,
Wherein her face she often vewed fayne,
8 And in her selfe-lou'd semblance tooke delight;
For she was wondrous faire, as any liuing wight.

1 So proud she shone in her princely state,

state > canopied throne; rank, condition

2 Looking to heaven; for earth she did disdain, 3 And sitting high (for lowly she did hate),

lowly > {Lowliness, humbleness; that which is, or they who are, lowly}

4 Lo underneath her scornful feet was lain 5 A dreadful dragon with a hideous train;

hideous > immense train > tail

6 And in her hand she held a mirror bright, 7 Wherein her face she often viewed fain,

fain > gladly, eagerly

8 And in her self-loved semblance took delight; 9 For she was wondrous fair, as any living wight.

wight > person, woman

104.11

Of griesly Pluto she the daughter was,
2 And sad Proserpina the Queene of hell;
Yet did she thinke her pearelesse +worth+ to pas
4 That parentage, with pride so did she swell,
And thundring Ioue, that high in heauen doth dwell,
6 And wield the world, she claymed for her syre,
Or if that any else did Ioue excell:
8 For to the highest she did still aspyre,
Or if ought higher were then that, did it desyre.

3 worth > wroth 1596

1 Of grisly Pluto she the daughter was,

grisly > horrible, fearsome

2 And sad Proserpine, the queen of hell; 3 Yet did she think her peerless worth to pass

pass > excel, surpass

4 That parentage, with pride so did she swell; 5 And thundering Jove, that high in heaven does dwell

Jove > (Here, "Jupiter Tonans", lord of the thunderbolt; he killed
Phaethon with a bolt of lightning)

6 And wield the world, she claimed for her sire,

wield > rule, reign over sire > father

7 Or if that any else did Jove excel:

that any else > any else [that]

8 For to the highest she did still aspire, 9 Or, if aught higher were than that, did it desire.

104.12

And proud Lucifera men did her call,
2 That made her selfe +a+ Queene, and crownd to be,
Yet rightfull kingdome she had none at all,
4 Ne heritage of natiue soueraintie,
But did vsurpe with wrong and tyrannie
6 Vpon the scepter, which she now did hold:
Ne ruld her +Realmes+ with lawes, but pollicie,
8 And strong aduizement of six wisards old,
That with their counsels bad her kingdome did vphold.

2 a > omitted from 1596 7 Realmes > Realme 1590

1 And proud Lucifera men did her call,

Lucifera > (Derived from "Lucifer", meaning "Light-bringer": a name for Satan, and for Venus as the morning star)

2 Who made herself a queen, and crowned to be; 3 Yet rightful kingdom she had none at all, 4 Nor heritage of native sovereignty,

native > {Rightful, by right of birth}

5 But did usurp with wrong and tyranny 6 Upon the sceptre which she now did hold:

Upon the > [The]

7 Nor ruled her realms with laws, but policy,

policy > political cunning, artfulness

8 And strong advisement of six wizards old,

advisement > advice six wizards > (Wizard = sage, here used derisively. The six are Sloth, Gluttony, Lechery, Avarice, Envy and Wrath, described in 104.18-35. Together with Lucifera herself, Pride, they comprise the Seven Deadly Sins)

9 That, with their counsels bad, her kingdom did uphold.

104.13

Soone as the +Elfin+ knight in presence came,
2 And false Duessa seeming Lady faire,
A gentle Husher, Vanitie by name
4 Made rowme, and passage for them did prepaire:
So goodly brought them to the lowest staire
6 Of her high throne, where they on humble knee
Making +obeyssance+, did the cause declare,
8 Why they were come, her royall state to see,
To proue the wide report of her great Maiestee.

1 Elfin > Elfing 1596 7 obeyssance > obeisance 1609

1 Soon as the Elfin knight in presence came

Soon > [As soon] presence > presence-chamber (where a sovereign receives visitors)

2 (And false Duessa, seeming lady fair), 3 A gentle usher, Vanity by name,

gentle > gentle; noble (used ironically)

4 Made room, and passage for them did prepare: 5 So goodly brought them to the lowest stair

goodly > courteously

6 Of her high throne, where they, on humble knee 7 Making obeisance, did the cause declare

declare > declare, make clear; relate

8 Why they were come, her royal state to see,

state > throne; majesty, pomp

9 To prove the wide report of her great majesty.

prove > confirm by personal experience

104.14

With loftie eyes, halfe loth to looke so low,
2 She thanked them in her disdainefull wise,
Ne other grace vouchsafed them to show
4 Of Princesse worthy, scarse them bad arise.
Her Lordes and Ladies all this while deuise
6 Themselues to setten forth to straungers sight:
Some frounce their curled haire in courtly guise,
8 Some prancke their ruffes, and others trimly dight
Their gay attire: each others greater pride does spight.

1 With lofty eyes, half loath to look so low, 2 She thanked them in her disdainful wise,

wise > manner

3 No other grace vouchsafed them to show

No > [But no]

4 Of princess worthy; scarce them bade arise. 5 Her lords and ladies all this while devise

devise > skilfully prepare, contrive; scheme

6 Themselves to set forth to strangers' sight:

set forth > exhibit, show off

7 Some frounce their curled hair in courtly guise;

frounce > twist into folds, plait guise > manner

8 Some prank their ruffs; and others trimly dight

prank > adjust; pleat dight > arrange

9 Their gay attire: each other's greater pride does spite.

spite > begrudge, envy

104.15

Goodly they all that knight do entertaine,
2 Right glad with him to haue increast their crew:
But to Duess' each one himselfe did paine
4 All kindnesse and faire courtesie to shew;
For in that court whylome her well they knew:
6 Yet the stout Faerie mongst the middest crowd
Thought all their glorie vaine in knightly vew,
8 And that great Princesse too exceeding prowd,
That to strange knight no better countenance allowd.

1 Goodly they all that knight do entertain,

Goodly > Courteously entertain > receive

2 Right glad with him to have increased their crew:

Right > Very

3 But to Duessa each one himself did pain 4 All kindness and fair courtesy to show; 5 For in that court whilom her well they knew:

whilom > of old, formerly

6 Yet the stout Faery amongst the middest crowd

stout > unyielding; proud; brave, bold middest > midmost

7 Thought all their glory vain in knightly view,

vain > foolish; empty

8 And that great princess too exceeding proud, 9 That to strange knight no better countenance allowed.

strange > foreign; new-come countenance > demeanour

104.16

Suddein vpriseth from her stately place
2 The royall Dame, and for her coche doth call:
All +hurtlen+ forth, and she with Princely pace,
4 As faire Aurora in her purple pall,
Out of the East the dawning day doth call:
6 So forth she comes: her brightnesse brode doth blaze;
The heapes of people thronging in the hall,
8 Do ride each other, vpon her to gaze:
Her glorious +glitterand+ light doth all mens eyes amaze.

3 hurtlen > hurlen 1609; cf. 104.40:1, 111.23:1, 205.8:7, 207.42:3 9 glitterand > glitter and 1596, 1609

1 Sudden uprises from her stately place 2 The royal dame, and for her coach does call: 3 All hurtle forth, and she with princely pace

hurtle > rush, dash pace > movement, motion; step

4 (As fair Aurora, in her purple pall,

Aurora > (Goddess of the dawn; "Lucifer" means "Light-bringer", and is one name for the morning star) pall > cloak (esp. of rich material)

5 Out of the east the dawning day does call): 6 So forth she comes; her brightness broad does blaze;

broad > abroad; broadly

7 The heaps of people thronging in the hall 8 Do ride each other, upon her to gaze: 9 Her glorious glittering light does all men's eyes amaze.

104.17

So forth she comes, and to her coche does clyme,
2 Adorned all with gold, and girlonds gay,
That seemd as fresh as Flora in her prime,
4 And stroue to match, in royall rich array,
Great Iunoes golden chaire, the which they say
6 The Gods stand gazing on, when she does ride
To Ioues high house through heauens bras-paued way
8 Drawne of faire Pecocks, that excell in pride,
And full of Argus eyes their tailes dispredden wide.

1 So forth she comes, and to her coach does climb, 2 Adorned all with gold, and garlands gay, 3 That seemed as fresh as Flora in her prime, 4 And strove to match, in royal rich array, 5 Great Juno's golden chair; which, they say,

chair > chariot (see Iliad 5.727. Juno is the queen of the gods, sister and wife of Jupiter)

6 The gods stand gazing on, when she does ride 7 To Jove's high house through heaven's brass-paved way,

To Jove's high house > (See Met. 2.533 ff.) heaven's brass-paved way > (See Iliad 14.173)

8 Drawn of fair peacocks, that excel in pride,

of > by excel > surpass [all] others

9 And full of Argus eyes their tails dispread wide.

Argus > (Argus Panoptes, watchman with a hundred eyes, set by Juno to watch Io and killed by Mercury; Juno placed his eyes in the tail of the peacock. See Met. 1.622-723; SC, gloss to "Julye" and to "October") dispread > spread out

104.18

But this was drawne of six vnequall beasts,
2 On which her six sage Counsellours did ryde,
Taught to obay their bestiall beheasts,
4 With like conditions to their kinds applyde:
Of which the first, that all the rest did guyde,
6 Was sluggish Idlenesse the nourse of sin;
Vpon a slouthfull Asse he chose to ryde,
8 Arayd in habit blacke, and amis thin,
Like to an holy Monck, the seruice to begin.

1 But this was drawn of six unequal beasts,

of > by unequal > different, ill-matched

2 On which her six sage counsellors did ride, 3 Taught to obey their bestial behests, 4 With like conditions to their kinds applied:

With like conditions to their kinds applied > (Literally, "With similar qualities to their natures employed"; each beast was appropriate to its rider)

5 Of which the first, that all the rest did guide, 6 Was sluggish Idleness, the nurse of sin;

Idleness > [Sloth]

7 Upon a slothful ass he chose to ride, 8 Arrayed in a habit black, and amice thin,

amice > cap, hood, cape (of some religious order)

9 Like a holy monk, the service to begin.

104.19

And in his hand his Portesse still he bare,
2 That much was worne, but therein little red,
For of deuotion he had little care,
4 Still drownd in sleepe, and most of his dayes ded;
Scarse could he once vphold his heauie hed,
6 To looken, whether it were night or day:
May seeme the wayne was very euill led,
8 When such an one had guiding of the way,
That knew not, whether right he went, or else astray.

1 And in his hand his portas still he bore,

portas > {Portable breviary, Roman Catholic prayer-book containing the Divine Office for each day} still > ever, continually

2 That much was worn, but therein little read,

therein little > [little]

3 For of devotion he had little care, 4 Still drowned in sleep, and most of his days dead;

Still > Ever

5 Scarce could he once uphold his heavy head, 6 To look whether it were night or day: 7 May seem the wain was very evil led,

May > [It may] wain > carriage, wagon; hence: coach

8 When such a one had guiding of the way, 9 That knew not whether right he went, or else astray.

104.20

From worldly cares himselfe he did esloyne,
2 And greatly shunned manly exercise,
+From+ euery worke he chalenged essoyne,
4 For contemplation sake: yet otherwise,
His life he led in lawlesse riotise;
6 By which he grew to grieuous malady;
For in his lustlesse limbs through euill guise
8 A shaking feuer raignd continually:
Such one was Idlenesse, first of this company.

3 From > For 1596, 1609

1 From worldly cares himself he did eloin,

eloin > remove, withdraw (as if from legal jurisdiction)

2 And greatly shunned manly exercise, 3 From every work he challenged essoin,

challenged essoin > claimed exemption (another legal term)

4 For contemplation's sake: yet otherwise 5 His life he led in lawless riotise,

riotise > indulgence, dissipation

6 By which he grew to grievous malady; 7 For in his lustless limbs, through evil guise,

lustless > {Listless; joyless, lacking pleasure or delight} guise > mode of life

8 A shaking fever reigned continually: 9 Such one was Idleness, first of this company.

104.21

And by his side rode loathsome Gluttony,
2 Deformed creature, on a filthie swyne,
His belly was vp-blowne with luxury,
4 And eke with fatnesse swollen were his eyne,
And like a Crane his necke was long and fyne,
6 With which he swallowd vp excessiue feast,
For want whereof poore people oft did pyne;
8 And all the way, most like a brutish beast,
He spued vp his gorge, that all did him deteast.

1 And by his side rode loathsome Gluttony, 2 Deformed creature, on a filthy swine; 3 His belly was up-blown with luxury,

up-blown > swollen luxury > surfeit, excess; dissipation

4 And eke with fatness swollen were his eyes;

eke > moreover

5 And, like a crane's, his neck was long and fine,

fine > thin, scrawny

6 With which he swallowed up excessive feast,

excessive > greedy, excessive; intemperate

7 For want whereof poor people oft did pine;

pine > waste away

8 And all the way, most like a brutish beast, 9 He spewed up his gorge, that all did him detest.

gorge > {Contents of stomach} that > [so that]

104.22

In greene vine leaues he was right fitly clad;
2 For other clothes he could not weare for heat,
And on his head an yuie girland had,
4 From vnder which fast trickled downe the sweat:
Still as he rode, he somewhat still did eat,
6 And in his hand did beare a bouzing can,
Of which he supt so oft, that on his seat
8 His dronken corse he scarse vpholden can,
In shape and life more like a monster, then a man.

1 In green vine-leaves he was right fitly clad:

fitly > (Spenser's Gluttony recalls Silenus (Met. 4.26-7, 11.89- 99); Silenus was the foster-father of Bacchus, god of wine)

2 For other clothes he could not wear for heat, 3 And on his head an ivy garland had,

ivy > (Sacred to Bacchus)

4 From under which fast trickled down the sweat. 5 Still as he rode he somewhat still did eat,

Still > Continually somewhat > a little, something

6 And in his hand did bear a boozing can,

boozing > drinking

7 Of which he supped so oft, that on his seat 8 His drunken corse he scarce uphold can,

corse > body

9 In shape and life more like a monster than a man.

104.23

Vnfit he was for any worldly thing,
2 And eke +vnhable+ once to stirre or go,
Not meet to be of counsell to a king,
4 Whose mind in meat and drinke was drowned so,
That from his friend he +seldome+ knew his fo:
6 Full of diseases was his carcas blew,
And a +dry dropsie+ through his flesh did flow:
8 Which by misdiet daily greater grew:
Such one was Gluttony, the second of that crew.

2 vnhable > vnable 1609 5 seldome > seeldome 1590; sildom 1609 7 dry dropsie > drydropsie 1590; dire dropsie _conj. Upton after Horace's dirus hydrops; _hydropsy sugg. Collier

1 Unfit he was for any worldly thing, 2 And eke unable once to stir or go;

eke > also once > ever, at all go > walk

3 Not meet to be of counsel to a king,

meet > fit king > [sovereign, i.e. Lucifera]

4 Whose mind in meat and drink was drowned so, 5 That from his friend he seldom knew his foe: 6 Full of diseases was his carcase blue,

blue > (The colour of putrid flesh)

7 And a dry dropsy through his flesh did flow,

dry dropsy > ?swelling, corpulence (a "wet" dropsy is a disease in which watery fluid collects in the tissues and body cavities. See also Textual Appendix)

8 Which by misdiet daily greater grew:

misdiet > improper diet

9 Such one was Gluttony, the second of that crew.

104.24

And next to him rode lustfull Lechery,
2 Vpon a bearded Goat, whose rugged haire,
And whally eyes (the signe of gelosy,)
4 Was like the person selfe, whom he did beare:
Who rough, and blacke, and filthy did appeare,
6 Vnseemely man to please faire Ladies eye;
Yet he of Ladies oft was loued deare,
8 When fairer faces were bid standen by:
O who does know the bent of womens fantasy?

1 And next to him rode lustful Lechery,

next to > immediately after; _the arrangement is:

FRONT Sloth Gluttony
Avarice Lechery
Envy Wrath
Satan
BACK Lucifera_

2 Upon a bearded goat, whose rugged hair

rugged > shaggy

3 And wall eyes (the sign of jealousy),

wall > whitely opaque; glaring

4 Was like the person himself whom it did bear:

Was like > [Resembled those of]

5 Who, rough and black, and filthy, did appear

appear > (Or "appear:", meaning "seem", "present himself to view")

6 Unseemly man to please fair ladies' eye; 7 Yet he of ladies oft was loved dear,

of > by

8 When fairer faces were bid to stand by: 9 O who does know the bent of women's fantasy?

104.25

In a greene gowne he clothed was full faire,
2 Which vnderneath did hide his filthinesse,
And in his hand a burning hart he bare,
4 Full of vaine follies, and new fanglenesse:
For he was false, and fraught with ficklenesse,
6 And learned had to loue with secret lookes,
And well could daunce, and sing with ruefulnesse,
8 And fortunes tell, and read in louing bookes,
And thousand other wayes, to bait his fleshly hookes.

1 In a green gown he clothed was full fair,

full > very, exceedingly

2 Which underneath did hide his filthiness,

filthiness > obscenity, moral defilement

3 And in his hand a burning heart he bore, 4 Full of vain follies and new-fangleness: 5 For he was false, and fraught with fickleness,

fraught > filled

6 And learned had to love with secret looks, 7 And well could dance, and sing with ruefulness, 8 And fortunes tell, and read in loving books,

loving books > erotica

9 And thousand other ways to bait his fleshly hooks.

fleshly > lustful

104.26

Inconstant man, that loued all he saw,
2 And lusted after all, that he did loue,
Ne would his looser life be tide to law,
4 But ioyd weake wemens hearts to +tempt+ and proue
If from their loyall loues he might them moue;
6 Which lewdnesse fild him with reprochfull paine
Of that fowle euill, which all men reproue,
8 That rots the marrow, and consumes the braine:
Such one was Lecherie, the third of all this traine.

4 tempt > tempt, 1590

1 Inconstant man, that loved all he saw, 2 And lusted after all that he did love, 3 Nor would his looser life be tied to law,

looser > too-loose

4 But joyed weak women's hearts to tempt, and prove

prove > test, try

5 If from their loyal loves he might them move; 6 Which lewdness filled him with reproachful pain

reproachful > {Worthy of reproach or censure}

7 Of that foul evil, which all men reprove,

that foul evil > [syphilis; or perhaps leprosy, noted by Hamilton (1980)]

8 That rots the marrow, and consumes the brain: 9 Such one was Lechery, the third of all this train.

104.27

And greedy Auarice by him did ride,
2 Vpon a Camell loaden all with gold;
Two iron +coffers+ hong on either side,
4 With precious mettall full, as they might hold,
And in his lap an heape of coine he told;
6 For of his wicked pelfe his God he made,
And vnto hell him selfe for money sold;
8 Accursed vsurie was all his trade,
And right and wrong ylike in equall ballaunce waide.

3 coffers > coffets 1590

1 And greedy Avarice by him did ride, 2 Upon a camel laden all with gold: 3 Two iron coffers hung on either side, 4 With precious metal full as they might hold,

might > could

5 And in his lap a heap of coin he told;

told > counted

6 For of his wicked pelf his god he made,

pelf > money, cash, "filthy lucre"

7 And to hell himself for money sold; 8 Accursed usury was all his trade, 9 And right and wrong alike in equal balance weighed.

104.28

His life was nigh vnto deaths doore yplast,
2 And thred-bare cote, and cobled shoes he ware,
Ne scarse good morsell all his life did tast,
4 But both from backe and belly still did spare,
To fill his bags, and richesse to compare;
6 Yet chylde ne kinsman liuing had he none
To leaue them to; but thorough daily care
8 To get, and nightly feare to lose his owne,
He led a wretched life vnto him selfe vnknowne.

1 His life was nigh to death's door placed, 2 And threadbare coat, and cobbled shoes, he wore;

cobbled > mended (usually repeatedly)

3 Nor scarce good morsel all his life did taste, 4 But both from back and belly still did spare,

still > always, continually

5 To fill his bags, and richesse to compare;

richesse > wealth compare > acquire, get

6 Yet child nor kinsman living had he none 7 To leave them to; but through daily care 8 To get, and nightly fear to lose, his own, 9 He led a wretched life, to himself unknown.

life, to himself unknown > [existence, not even realizing it; or, with a change in punctuation: life to himself, unknown (he was a solitary miser). Spenser may have intended both senses]

104.29

Most wretched wight, whom nothing might suffise,
2 Whose greedy lust did lacke in greatest store,
Whose need had end, but no end couetise,
4 Whose wealth was want, whose plenty made him pore,
Who had enough, yet wished +euer more+;
6 A vile disease, and eke in foote and hand
A grieuous gout tormented him full sore,
8 That well he could not touch, nor go, nor stand:
Such one was Auarice, the +fourth+ of this faire band.

5 euer more > euermore 1609 9 fourth > forth 1590

1 Most wretched wight, whom nothing might suffice,

wight > creature

2 Whose greedy lust did lack in greatest store,

lust > desire lack in greatest store > (A proverb: He who desires the most lacks the most; lack = want, store = measure)

3 Whose need had end, but no end covetise,

no end covetise > [whose covetousness had no end]

4 Whose wealth was want, whose plenty made him poor, 5 Who had enough, yet wished ever more;

wished ever > [ever wished]

6 A vile disease, and eke in foot and hand

eke > moreover, in addition

7 A grievous gout tormented him full sore,

full > exceedingly

8 That well he could not touch, nor go, nor stand:

That > [So that] go > walk

9 Such one was Avarice, the fourth of this fair band.

104.30

And next to him malicious Enuie rode,
2 Vpon a rauenous wolfe, and still did chaw
Betweene his cankred teeth a venemous tode,
4 That all the poison ran about his +chaw+;
But inwardly he chawed his owne maw
6 At neighbours wealth, that made him euer sad;
For death it was, when any good he saw,
8 And wept, that cause of weeping none he had,
But when he heard of harme, he wexed wondrous glad.

4 chaw > jaw 1609

1 And next to him malicious Envy rode

next to > immediately after

2 Upon a ravenous wolf, and still did chaw

still > ever, continually chaw > chew, champ upon; fig.: ruminate, brood upon

3 Between his cankered teeth a venomous toad,

cankered > ulcerated

4 That all the poison ran about his chaw;

That > [So that] chaw > jaw, jaws

5 But inwardly he chawed his own maw

maw > stomach

6 At neighbour's wealth, that made him ever sad;

neighbour > [specifically, perhaps, Avarice] wealth > wealth; or: well-being

7 For death it was, when any good he saw, 8 And wept, that cause of weeping none he had, 9 But when he heard of harm he waxed wondrous glad.

waxed > grew

104.31

All in a kirtle of discolourd say
2 He clothed was, ypainted full of eyes;
And in his bosome secretly there lay
4 An hatefull Snake, the which his taile vptyes
In many folds, and mortall sting implyes.
6 Still as he rode, he gnasht his teeth, to see
Those heapes of gold with griple Couetyse,
8 And grudged at the great felicitie
Of proud Lucifera, and his owne companie.

1 All in a kirtle of discoloured say

kirtle > coat (reaching to knees or beyond) discoloured > varicoloured say > {A thin material used for cloaks, etc.}

2 He clothed was, painted full of eyes; 3 And in his bosom secretly there lay 4 A hateful snake, which its tail upties 5 In many folds, and mortal sting implies.

mortal > lethal implies > (Literally) enfolds; conceals

6 Still as he rode, he gnashed his teeth to see

Still > Continually

7 Those heaps of gold with gripple covetise,

gripple > griping, niggardly covetise > covetousness, avarice

8 And grudged at the great felicity

grudged at > begrudged, envied

9 Of proud Lucifera, and his own company.

104.32

He hated all good workes and vertuous deeds,
2 And him no lesse, that any like did vse,
And who with gracious bread the hungry feeds,
4 His almes for want of faith he doth accuse;
So euery good to bad he doth abuse:
6 And eke the verse of famous Poets witt
He does backebite, and spightfull poison spues
8 From leprous mouth on all, that euer writt:
Such one vile Enuie was, that +fifte+ in row did sitt.

9 fifte > first 1590 etc.: FE

1 He hated all good works and virtuous deeds, 2 And him no less, that any like did use;

like > of the sort use > undertake, perform, practise

3 And who with gracious bread the hungry feeds,

who > [whoever]

4 His alms for want of faith he does accuse;

alms > charitable actions

5 So every good to bad he does abuse:

So every good to bad he does abuse > [He imputes his own values to everyone else; "abuse" here = "misrepresent">[

6 And eke the verse of famous poets' wit

eke > also

7 He does backbite, and spiteful poison spews 8 From leprous mouth on all that ever writ:

writ > was written; or: wrote

9 Such one vile Envy was, that fifth in row did sit.

104.33

And him beside rides fierce reuenging Wrath,
2 Vpon a Lion, loth for to be led;
And in his hand a burning brond he hath,
4 The which he brandisheth about his hed;
His eyes did hurle forth sparkles fiery red,
6 And stared sterne on all, that him beheld,
As ashes pale of hew and seeming ded;
8 And on his dagger still his hand he held,
Trembling through hasty rage, when choler in him sweld.

1 And him beside rides fierce revenging Wrath, 2 Upon a lion, loath to be led; 3 And in his hand a burning brand he has,

brand > brand; or, perhaps: sword

4 Which he brandishes about his head; 5 His eyes did hurl forth sparkles fiery red, 6 And stared stern on all that him beheld,

stern > fiercely, mercilessly

7 As ashes pale of hue, and seeming dead;

hue > colour [his complexion was as pale as ashes]

8 And on his dagger still his hand he held,

still > continuously

9 Trembling through hasty rage, when choler in him swelled.

choler > (One of the four principal humours of the body, which, according to medieval belief, determine one's mental and physical attributes: phlegm, blood, black bile, and choler. Choler was associated with rage)

104.34

His ruffin raiment all was staind with blood,
2 Which he had spilt, and all to rags yrent,
Through vnaduized rashnesse woxen wood;
4 For of his hands he had no gouernement,
Ne car'd for bloud in his auengement:
6 But when the furious fit was ouerpast,
His cruell facts he often would repent;
8 Yet wilfull man he neuer would forecast,
How many mischieues should ensue his heedlesse hast.

1 His ruffin raiment all was stained with blood

ruffin > ruffian, ruffianly (also the name of a fiend, and a cant- word for the Devil) raiment > clothing

2 Which he had spilt, and all to rags rent,

rent > torn

3 Through unadvised rashness waxed wood;

unadvised > ill-considered waxed > grown, become wood > furious, mad [When through ill-considered rashness he had become furious]

4 For of his hands he had no government,

government > control

5 Nor cared for blood in his avengement:

cared for > cared about, shrank from [shedding] avengement > vengeance

6 But, when the furious fit was overpassed,

overpassed > over, at an end

7 His cruel facts he often would repent;

facts > deeds

8 Yet, wilful man, he never would forecast

forecast > [consider beforehand]

9 How many mischiefs should ensue his heedless haste.

mischiefs > evils, misfortunes ensue > follow

104.35

Full many mischiefes follow cruell Wrath;
2 Abhorred bloudshed, and tumultuous strife,
Vnmanly murder, and vnthrifty scath,
4 Bitter despight, with rancours rusty knife,
And fretting griefe the enemy of life;
6 All these, and many euils moe haunt ire,
The swelling Splene, and Frenzy raging rife,
8 The shaking Palsey, and Saint Fraunces fire:
Such one was Wrath, the last of this vngodly tire.

1 Full many mischiefs follow cruel Wrath:

Full > Very, exceedingly mischiefs > evils, misfortunes

2 Abhorred bloodshed, and tumultuous strife, 3 Unmanly murder, and unthrifty scathe,

Unmanly > {Dishonourable to, degrading to, unbefitting a man} unthrifty > unfortunate; prodigal, profligate scathe > damage, harm

4 Bitter despite, with rancour's rusty knife,

despite > rage; malice rusty > blood-stained; dirty; rusty

5 And fretting grief, the enemy of life;

fretting > devouring; gnawing (cf. 106.44:5)

6 All these, and many evils more, haunt Ire,

Ire > [Wrath]

7 The swelling spleen, and frenzy raging rife,

spleen > {Spite; the organ itself, with which anger and spite were associated}

8 The shaking palsy, and Saint Francis' fire:

Saint Francis' fire > {Erysipelas, a skin disease characterized by a deep red colour}

9 Such one was Wrath, the last of this ungodly tire.

tire > accoutrement, equipment; ornament, embellishment [of Lucifera] or: ?team (from the Common Romanic tirare, to draw, pull)

104.36

And after all, vpon the wagon beame
2 Rode +Sathan+, with a smarting whip in hand,
With which he forward lasht the laesie teme,
4 So oft as Slowth still in the mire did stand.
Huge routs of people did about them band,
6 Showting for ioy, and still before their way
A foggy mist had couered all the land;
8 And vnderneath their feet, all scattered lay
Dead sculs and bones of men, whose life had gone astray.

2 Sathan > Satan 1609

1 And, after all, upon the wagon beam 2 Rode Satan, with a smarting whip in hand, 3 With which he forward lashed the lazy team, 4 So oft as Sloth still in the mire did stand.

still > motionless; yet

5 Huge routs of people did about them band,

routs > {Crowds, clamorous or riotous assemblages}

6 Shouting for joy; and still before their way 7 A foggy mist had covered all the land;

mist > (Symbol of deception: cf. 102.38:5, 212.34:5)

8 And, underneath their feet, all scattered lay 9 Dead skulls and bones of men whose life had gone astray.

104.37

So forth they marchen in this goodly sort,
2 To take the solace of the open aire,
And in fresh flowring fields themselues to sport;
4 Emongst the rest rode that false Lady faire,
The fowle Duessa, next vnto the chaire
6 Of proud +Lucifera+, as one of the traine:
But that good knight would not so nigh repaire,
8 Him selfe estraunging from their ioyaunce vaine,
Whose fellowship seemd far vnfit for warlike swaine.

6 Lucifera > Lucifer' 1590

1 So forth they march in this goodly sort,

goodly > fine; courteous sort > company, band

2 To take the solace of the open air,

solace > pleasure, comfort (implying relief)

3 And in fresh flowering fields themselves to sport; 4 Amongst the rest rode that false lady fair, 5 The foul Duessa, next to the chair

chair > chariot, car; hence: coach

6 Of proud Lucifera, as one of the train: 7 But that good knight would not so nigh repair,

repair > go, betake himself

8 Himself estranging from their joyance vain,

estranging > distancing joyance > merrymaking; delight (this word apparently coined by Spenser) vain > vain; foolish, empty

9 Whose fellowship seemed far unfit for warlike swain.

swain > youth, young man

104.38

So hauing solaced themselues a space
2 With pleasaunce of the breathing fields yfed,
They backe returned to the Princely Place;
4 Whereas an errant knight in armes ycled,
And heathnish shield, wherein with letters red
6 Was writ Sans ioy, they new arriued find:
Enflam'd with fury and fiers hardy-hed,
8 He seemd in hart to harbour thoughts vnkind,
And nourish bloudy vengeaunce in his bitter mind.

1 So, having solaced themselves a space, 2 With pleasance of the breathing fields fed,

breathing > airy

3 They back returned to the princely place; 4 Where an errant knight in arms clad,

errant > itinerant (a "knight errant" roamed in quest of adventure; the word-order here also implies the sense of erring, deviating, etc.)

5 And heathenish shield, wherein with letters red 6 Was written Sansjoy, they new arrived find:

new > newly

7 Inflamed with fury and fierce hardihood,

hardihood > audacity, boldness; hardness

8 He seemed in heart to harbour thoughts unkind, 9 And nourish bloody vengeance in his bitter mind.

104.39

Who when the shamed shield of slaine Sans foy
2 He spide with that same Faery champions page,
Bewraying him, that did of late destroy
4 His eldest brother, burning all with rage
He to him leapt, and that same enuious gage
6 Of victors glory from him snatcht away:
But th'Elfin knight, which ought that warlike wage,
8 Disdaind to +loose+ the meed he wonne in fray,
And him +rencountring+ fierce, reskewd the noble pray.

8 loose > lose 1609 9 rencountring > re'ncountring 1609

1 Who, when the shamed shield of slain Sansfoy

shamed > (Because it is placed upside-down: see 104.41:9)

2 He spied with that same Faery champion's page

page > [the dwarf]

3 (Bewraying him that did of late destroy

Bewraying > Revealing, betraying

4 His eldest brother), burning all with rage 5 He to him leapt, and that same envious gage

envious > enviable; also: odious gage > pledge

6 Of victor's glory from him snatched away: 7 But the Elfin knight, which ought that warlike wage,

ought > owned wage > spoil of war

8 Disdained to loose the meed he won in fray;

loose > release meed > reward; hence: prize

9 And, him rencountering fierce, rescued the noble prey.

rencountering > engaging (in battle) prey > plunder, spoil

104.40

Therewith they gan to +hurtlen+ greedily,
2 Redoubted battaile ready to darrayne,
And clash their shields, and shake their +swords+ on hy,
4 That with their sturre they troubled all the traine;
Till that great Queene vpon eternall paine
6 Of high displeasure, that ensewen might,
Commaunded them their fury to refraine,
8 And if that either to that shield had right,
In equall lists they should the morrow next it fight.

1 hurtlen > hurlen 1609 3 swords > swerds 1590

1 Therewith they began to hurtle greedily,

Therewith > With that; thereupon hurtle > brandish arms (catachr.); clash, rush together greedily > recklessly, eagerly

2 Redoubted battle ready to deraign,

Redoubted > Doughty, valiant, redoubtable deraign > {Challenge; fight a contest in order to settle a dispute}

3 And clash their shields, and shake their swords on high, 4 That with their stir they troubled all the train;

That > [So that] train > retinue

5 Till that great queen, upon eternal pain 6 Of high displeasure that ensue might,

ensue might > [might ensue]

7 Commanded them their fury to refrain, 8 And, if either to that shield had right, 9 In equal lists they should the morrow next it fight.

equal lists > impartial knightly contest ("lists" were the palisades enclosing the tilting-ground) it fight > [contest the right to the shield]

104.41

Ah dearest Dame, (quoth then the Paynim bold,)
2 Pardon the errour of enraged wight,
Whom great griefe made forget the raines to hold
4 Of reasons rule, to see this recreant knight,
No knight, but treachour full of false despight
6 And shamefull treason, who through guile hath slayn
The prowest knight, that euer field did fight,
8 Euen stout Sans foy (O who can then refrayn?)
Whose shield he beares +renuerst+, the more to heape disdayn.

9 renuerst > re'nverst 1609

1 "Ah, dearest dame," quoth then the paynim bold,

paynim > pagan, heathen

2 "Pardon the error of enraged wight,

wight > person

3 Whom great grief made forget the reins to hold 4 Of reason's rule, to see this recreant knight

recreant > cowardly; apostate

5 (No knight, but treacher full of false despite

treacher > cheat, deceiver despite > malice

6 And shameful treason) who through guile has slain 7 The prowest knight that ever field did fight,

prowest > bravest field > [a] battle; [in the] field of battle

8 Even stout Sansfoy (O who can then refrain?),

Even > To wit; that is; no less than refrain > restrain oneself [from anger, desire for revenge]

9 Whose shield he bears reversed, the more to heap disdain.

reversed > upside-down (symbolizing ignominious defeat)

104.42

And to augment the glorie of his guile,
2 His dearest loue the faire Fidessa loe
Is there possessed of the traytour vile,
4 Who reapes the haruest sowen by his foe,
Sowen in bloudy field, and bought with woe:
6 That brothers hand shall dearely well requight
So be, {o^} Queene, you equall fauour showe.
8 Him litle answerd th'angry Elfin knight;
He neuer meant with words, but swords to plead his right.

1 "And, to augment the glory of his guile,

glory > [boastful spirit]

2 His dearest love, the fair Fidessa, lo 3 Is there possessed of the traitor vile,

of > by

4 Who reaps the harvest sown by his foe, 5 Sown in bloody field, and bought with woe: 6 That brother's hand shall dearly well requite,

That > [That deed his]

7 So be, O Queen, you equal favour show!"

So be > If equal > impartial

8 Him little answered the angry Elfin knight; 9 He never meant with words, but swords, to plead his right.

104.43

But threw his gauntlet as a sacred +pledge+,
2 His cause in combat the next day to try:
So been they parted both, with harts on +edge+,
4 To be aueng'd each on his enimy.
That night they pas in ioy and iollity,
6 Feasting and courting both in bowre and hall;
For Steward was excessiue Gluttonie,
8 That of his plenty poured forth to all;
Which doen, the Chamberlain Slowth did to rest them call.

1 pledge > pledg 1590 3 edge > edg 1590

1 But threw his gauntlet as a sacred pledge, 2 His cause in combat the next day to try: 3 So been they parted both, with hearts on edge

been > [were]

4 To be avenged each on his enemy. 5 That night they pass in joy and jollity,

jollity > revelry

6 Feasting and courting both in bower and hall; 7 For steward was excessive Gluttony, 8 That of his plenty poured forth to all; 9 Which done, the chamberlain, Sloth, did to rest them call.

104.44

Now whenas darkesome night had all displayd
2 Her coleblacke curtein ouer brightest skye,
The warlike youthes on dayntie couches layd,
4 Did chace away sweet sleepe from sluggish eye,
To muse on meanes of hoped victory.
6 But whenas Morpheus had with leaden mace
Arrested all that courtly company,
8 Vp-rose Duessa from her resting place,
And to the Paynims lodging comes with silent pace.

1 Now when darksome Night had all displayed

Night > (See 105.20 ff.) displayed > spread, spread out

2 Her coal-black curtain over brightest sky, 3 The warlike youths, on dainty couches laid, 4 Did chase away sweet sleep from sluggish eye, 5 To muse on means of hoped victory. 6 But when Morpheus had with leaden mace

Morpheus > (The god of dreams: one of the sons of Somnus, the god of sleep)

7 Arrested all that courtly company, 8 Uprose Duessa from her resting place, 9 And to the paynim's lodging comes with silent pace.

paynim > pagan, heathen pace > movement, step

104.45

Whom broad awake she finds, in troublous fit,
2 Forecasting, how his foe he might annoy,
And him amoues with speaches seeming fit:
4 Ah deare Sans ioy, next dearest to Sans foy,
Cause of my new griefe, cause of +my+ new ioy,
6 Ioyous, to see his ymage in mine eye,
And greeu'd, to thinke how foe did him destroy,
8 That was the flowre of grace and cheualrye;
Lo his Fidessa to thy secret faith I flye.

5 my > omitted from 1590 and 1596: FE

1 Whom broad awake she finds, in troublous fit,

fit > condition, mood

2 Forecasting how his foe he might annoy,

Forecasting > Planning annoy > injure

3 And him amoves with speeches seeming fit:

amoves > stirs fit > fit, appropriate

4 "Ah, dear Sansjoy, next dearest to Sansfoy, 5 Cause of my new grief, cause of my new joy; 6 Joyous, to see his image in my eye, 7 And grieved, to think how foe did him destroy, 8 That was the flower of grace and chivalry; 9 Lo his Fidessa, to your secret faith I fly."

104.46

With gentle wordes he can her fairely greet,
2 And bad say on the secret of her hart.
Then sighing soft, I learne that litle sweet
4 Oft tempred is (quoth she) with muchell smart:
For since my brest was launcht with louely dart
6 Of deare Sansfoy, I neuer ioyed howre,
But in eternall woes my weaker hart
8 Haue wasted, louing him with all my powre,
And for his sake haue felt full many an heauie stowre.

1 With gentle words he can her fairly greet,

gentle > generous; courteous can > did fairly > courteously

2 And bade say on the secret of her heart.

say on > tell

3 Then, sighing soft, "I learn that little sweet 4 Oft tempered is," quoth she, "with mickle smart:

mickle > much

5 For since my breast was lanced with lovely dart

lovely > amorous

6 Of dear Sansfoy, I never joyed hour,

joyed > [enjoyed an]

7 But in eternal woes my weaker heart

weaker > too-weak

8 Have wasted, loving him with all my power, 9 And for his sake have felt full many a heavy stour.

full > very stour > [time of] turmoil or distress

104.47

At last when perils all I weened past,
2 And hop'd to reape the crop of all my care,
Into new woes vnweeting I was cast,
4 By this false faytor, who vnworthy ware
His worthy shield, whom he with guilefull snare
6 Entrapped slew, and brought to shamefull graue.
Me silly maid away with him he bare,
8 And euer since hath kept in darksome caue,
For that I would not yeeld, that to Sans-foy I gaue.

1 "At last, when perils all I weened past,

weened > supposed

2 And hoped to reap the crop of all my care, 3 Into new woes unweeting I was cast

unweeting > ignorant, unwitting

4 By this false faitour, who unworthy wears

faitour > impostor, cheat wears > bears, carries

5 His worthy shield, whom he, with guileful snare,

His > [Sansfoy's] he > [the Redcross Knight]

6 Entrapped slew, and brought to shameful grave.

Entrapped slew > [Killed while trapped]

7 Me, silly maid, away with him he bore,

silly > defenceless; innocent

8 And ever since has kept in darksome cave, 9 For that I would not yield that to Sansfoy I gave.

For that > Because that > [that which]

104.48

But since faire Sunne hath sperst that lowring clowd,
2 And to my loathed life now shewes some light,
Vnder your beames I will me safely shrowd,
4 From dreaded storme of his disdainfull spight:
To you th'inheritance belongs by right
6 Of brothers prayse, to you eke longs his loue.
Let not his loue, let not his restlesse spright
8 Be vnreueng'd, that calles to you aboue
From wandring Stygian shores, where it doth endlesse moue.

1 "But since fair sun has spersed that louring cloud,

spersed > dispersed

2 And to my loathed life now shows some light, 3 Under your beams I will me safely shroud

shroud > take shelter

4 From dreaded storm of his disdainful spite:

disdainful > angry

5 To you the inheritance belongs by right 6 Of brother's praise, to you eke belongs his love.

praise > praiseworthiness; merit, virtue eke > also

7 Let not his love, let not his restless spirit, 8 Be unrevenged, that calls to you above 9 From wandering Stygian shores, where it does endless move."

Stygian > {Of the River Styx, one of the five rivers of hell; the river across which dead souls must pass. See Aen., 6.312 ff.} endless > eternally

104.49

Thereto said he, faire Dame, be nought dismaid
2 For sorrowes past; their griefe is with them gone:
Ne yet of present perill be affraid;
4 For needlesse feare did neuer vantage none,
And helplesse hap it booteth not to mone.
6 Dead is Sans-foy, his vitall paines are past,
Though greeued ghost for vengeance deepe do grone:
8 He liues, that shall him pay his dewties last,
And guiltie Elfin bloud shall sacrifice in hast.

1 Thereto said he, "Fair dame, be naught dismayed

Thereto > To that

2 For sorrows past; their grief is with them gone: 3 Nor yet of present peril be afraid; 4 For needless fear did never vantage none,

vantage > profit, benefit none > anyone

5 And helpless hap it boots not to moan.

helpless hap it boots not to moan > [it is of no avail to bemoan an unavoidable occurrence]

6 Dead is Sansfoy, his vital pains are past,

vital > [of life, worldly]

7 Though grieved ghost for vengeance deep do groan:

grieved > [his] injured

8 He lives, that shall him pay his duties last,

He > [The Redcross Knight] duties > debts

9 And guilty Elfin blood shall sacrifice in haste."

104.50

O but I feare the fickle freakes (quoth shee)
2 Of fortune +false+, and oddes of armes in field.
Why dame (quoth he) what oddes can euer bee,
4 Where both do fight alike, to win or yield?
Yea but (quoth she) he beares a charmed shield,
6 And eke enchaunted armes, that none can perce,
Ne none can wound the man, that does them wield.
8 Charmd or enchaunted (answerd he then ferce)
I no whit reck, ne you the like need to reherce.

2 false > salse 1596

1 "O but I fear the fickle freaks," quoth she,

freaks > whims

2 "Of Fortune false, and odds of arms in field."

odds > differences, inequalities field > battle, the field of battle

3 "Why, dame," quoth he, "what odds can ever be, 4 Where both do fight alike, to win or yield?"

alike > [in equal lists: see 104.40:9]

5 "Yes, but," quoth she, "he bears a charmed shield, 6 And eke enchanted arms, that none can pierce,

eke > moreover

7 Nor none can wound the man that does them wield."

none can > can anyone

8 "Charmed or enchanted," answered he then fierce, 9 "I no whit reck; nor you the like need to rehearse.

reck > care about, take account of rehearse > give an account of

104.51

But faire Fidessa, sithens fortunes guile,
2 Or enimies powre hath now captiued you,
Returne from whence ye came, and rest a while
4 Till morrow next, that I the Elfe subdew,
And with Sans-foyes dead dowry you endew.
6 Ay me, that is a double death (she said)
With proud foes sight my sorrow to renew:
8 Where euer yet I be, my secret aid
Shall follow you. So passing forth she him obaid.

1 "But, fair Fidessa, sithens Fortune's guile

sithens > since

2 Or enemy's power has now captived you,

captived you > taken you captive

3 Return from whence you came, and rest awhile, 4 Till morrow next, that I the Elf subdue,

that > when

5 And with Sansfoy's dead dowry you endew."

Sansfoy's dead > [dead Sansfoy's] endew > endow; or: endue

6 "Ay me! That is a double death," she said, 7 "With proud foe's sight my sorrow to renew: 8 Wherever yet I be, my secret aid 9 Shall follow you." So, passing forth, she him obeyed.