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6. [not his Masters] written above not the Gentleman’s own (but only not is erased)
7. [had] added above line
[indisputably become considerably worse] for indisputably & evidently become much worse
10. passed erased before [left behind]
[expressing (saying erased) with a most intelligent (and seeming erased) portentous countenance] written over as Bad as it had been before the Change seemed to say
13. [could safely proceed] for had ever thought of proceeding
16. Travellors beleived found themselves at first only shaken & bruised erased before [Gentleman]
18. [at first] added above line
21. [soon] added above line
22. [in a few moments] erased after of it and added above line after obliged