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| 'Mid crowded obelisks and urns I sought the untimely grave of Burns; Sons of the Bard, my heart still mourns With sorrow true; And more would grieve, but that it turns Trembling to you! Through twilight shades of good and ill Ye now are panting up life's hill, And more than common strength and skill Must ye display; If ye would give the better will Its lawful sway. Hath Nature strung your nerves to bear Intemperance with less harm, beware! But if the Poet's wit ye share, Like him can speed The social hour—of tenfold care There will be need; For honest men delight will take To spare your failings for his sake, Will flatter you,—and fool and rake Your steps pursue; And of your Father's name will make A snare for you. Far from their noisy haunts retire, And add your voices to the quire That sanctify the cottage fire With service meet; There seek the genius of your Sire, His spirit greet; Or where,'mid "lonely heights and hows," He paid to Nature tuneful vows; Or wiped his honourable brows Bedewed with toil, While reapers strove, or busy ploughs Upturned the soil; His judgment with benignant ray Shall guide, his fancy cheer, your way; But ne'er to a seductive lay Let faith be given; Nor deem that "light which leads astray, Is light from Heaven." Let no mean hope your souls enslave; Be independent, generous, brave; Your Father such example gave, And such revere; But be admonished by his grave, And think, and fear! [Note] [Contents 1803] [Main Contents] | [1] [2] [3] | [D] [E] [F] | 5 10 15 20 25 30 35 40 45 |
| 1827 | |
| Ye now are panting up life's hill! 'Tis twilight time of good and ill, | 1807 |
Ye now are panting up life's hill!
'Tis twilight time of good and ill,
| 1840 | |
| Strong bodied if ye be to bear Intemperance with less harm, beware! But if your Father's wit ye share, Then, then indeed, Ye Sons of Burns! for watchful care | 1807 |
| ... for tenfold care | 1827 |
Strong bodied if ye be to bear
Intemperance with less harm, beware!
But if your Father's wit ye share,
Then, then indeed,
Ye Sons of Burns! for watchful care
... for tenfold care
The text of 1827 is otherwise identical with that of 1840.
| 1840 | |
| For honest men delight will take To shew you favor for his sake, Will flatter you; and Fool and Rake | 1807 |
| For their beloved Poet's sake, Even honest men delight will take To flatter you; ... | 1820 |
| Even honest Men delight will take To spare your failings for his sake, Will flatter you,— ... | 1827 |
For honest men delight will take
To shew you favor for his sake,
Will flatter you; and Fool and Rake
For their beloved Poet's sake,
Even honest men delight will take
To flatter you; ...
Even honest Men delight will take
To spare your failings for his sake,
Will flatter you,— ...
In the edition of 1807, this poem has the title Address to the Sons of Burns after visiting their Father's Grave (August 14th, 1803). Slight changes were made in the title afterwards.—Ed.
Dorothy Wordsworth wrote, in her Recollections of this tour, under date August 18th, 1803,
"William wrote long afterwards the following Address to the sons of the ill-fated poet."
Ed.
This explanatory note appears in every edition of the Poems from 1827 to 1850. It is taken (but not literally) from the Recollections of a Tour made in Scotland as published in 1875.—Ed.
From Burns's Epistle to James Smith, l. 53.—Ed.
From Burns's poem, The Vision, Duan Second.—Ed.
In the edition of 1807, the poem began with what is now the second stanza, and consisted of four stanzas only, viz. Nos. ii., iii., iv., and viii. Stanzas i., v., vi., and vii. were added in 1827. Stanza iii. was omitted in 1820, but restored in 1827.—Ed.
Note:
In Dorothy Wordsworth's Recollections of this Tour we find, under date August 18, 1803:
"The grave of Burns's Son, which we had just seen by the side of his Father, and some stories heard at Dumfries respecting the dangers his surviving children were exposed to, filled us with melancholy concern, which had a kind of connection with ourselves."
"The body of Burns was not allowed to remain long in this place. To suit the plan of a rather showy mausoleum his remains were removed into a more commodious spot of the same kirkyard on the 5th July 1815."—(Allan Cunningham.)
Ellen Irwin; or, the Braes of Kirtle, comes next in this series of "Memorials of a Tour in Scotland, 1803." It has [already] been printed, however, (p. 124), in its proper chronological place, among the poems belonging to the year 1800. —Ed.
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