On page 7, a period was placed after "by a meadow", and a period was placed after "I should say".
On page 14, a quotation mark was removed after the phrase "called for a fresh pipe.".
On page 17, "to speak them" was replaced with "to speak to them".
On page 27, the double quotation marks around the poem has been replaced with single quotation marks, as the poem is part of a larger quote.
On page 38, "He eat of all" was replaced with "He ate of all".
On page 48, a period was placed after "he is her lover".
On page 49, "doubt and fear and love's first food" was replaced with "doubt and fear are love's first food".
On page 55, a double quotation mark before "Mr. Bradley, it is the King's birthday" was replaced with a single quotation mark.
On page 65, "she asked" was replaced with "She asked".
On page 74, the double quotation mark was removed after "Wonderful!".