“remember, writing now, Oh! Elissa, as a father” to oh.
[Part II/Chapter V]
“He unmasked his battery without futher delay” to further.
“my men will, storm the palace, and, unless they find me” delete first comma.
[Part III/Chapter IV]
“the heavy armed cavalry men being in the former, two men” to heavy-armed.
[Part III/Chapter XII]
“shyly responding to the advances of the the Prince Massinissa” delete one the.
[Part IV/Chapter VI]
“To him then was the Princess Cœcilla offered as his wife” to Cœcilia.