7. (H.) “Most furiously.”

(S.) “Right furiouslie.”

9. (H.) A modernised stanza.

(S.) Scott deletes it.

15. (H.) Scott rewrites the stanza thus,

(H.)

But I will stay at Otterburn,
Where you shall welcome be;
And if ye come not at three days end,
A coward I’ll call thee.

(S.)

“Thither will I come,” proud Percy said,
“By the might of Our Ladye.”
“There will I bide thee,” said the Douglas,
“My troth I’ll plight to thee.”

19. (H.) “I have seen a dreary dream.”