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About 8 a.m. a corporal of the King's Own" who had been doing
About 8 a.m. a corporal of the King's Own who had been doing
Woodgate called to me "You take the two centre platoons
Woodgate called to me: "You take the two centre platoons
formed the fish pond of the ancient monastry of Buigny l'Abbe;
formed the fish pond of the ancient monastery of Buigny l'Abbe;
the roof of a subterranean passage leading from the monastry,
the roof of a subterranean passage leading from the monastery,
There were excellent, hot and cold shower baths for the men,
There were excellent hot and cold shower baths for the men,
"Two Lundy's had been prepared, one large and the other small.
Two Lundy's had been prepared, one large and the other small.
Fruits, plumb pudding, Xmas deserts.
Fruits, plumb pudding, Xmas desserts.
This time we gave the Boche 500 to every 50 of theirs,
This time we gave the Bosche 500 to every 50 of theirs,
On February 29 our first death occured, poor young Watt
On February 29 our first death occurred, poor young Watt