Change (she said, “sinct I come here.”) to since.
[Chapter VII]
“and gradually, as he proceded on his way” to proceeded.
(“You wont do it?”) to won’t.
[Chapter VIII]
“be made to recover the red morrocco handbag” to morocco.
“and had put the advertisement into the Daily Post” italicize Daily Post.
[Chapter IX]
“Was I? You are lieing, you know.” to lying.
[Chapter X]