[Chapter III]
Change “to realise in it a a sense of my own” delete one a.
“to marshall these resolutely before my mind’s eye” to marshal.
[Chapter IV]
(“Ce que femme veut, Dieu le veut,” she answered,) italicize French text.
[Chapter V]
“Didn’t she suggest this to to you?” delete one to.
[Chapter XI]
“a bottle of gin and one of peppermint esssence” to essence.
[Chapter XIII]