“Its naught that concerns you,” to It’s.
[Chapter VIII]
“on the wash hand stand a rush candle” to wash-hand stand.
[Chapter X]
(glancing at me, “Dad thought there ought to be) to dad.
[Chapter XIV]
“on which a protruding red upperlip lay like” to upper lip.
“I had been with him getting on a a year” delete one a.
[Chapter XV]
“eye to find flaws in my phrasology” to phraseology.