Steps toward the Dramatic Climax: Henry “sees” Phoebe until his mind gives way from brooding. He is possessed of a fixed idea: Phoebe left because he “reproached her for not leaving his pipe where he was accustomed to find it.” He searches for her (immediate first steps given in detail) nearly seven years.
Dramatic Climax: He finds her.
Steps to the Immediate Climax of Action: He follows her to the edge of the cliff; he sees her below among the blooming apple trees.
Climax of Action: He leaps over the cliff.
Dénouement: He is found, a smile upon his lips.
Details. Study the presentation of Henry, which gives so clear an impression of his unbalanced mind. Study the motivation for this insanity, the author’s analysis of Henry’s psychology, Henry’s acts, and his speeches. What contributory effect has the calling for Phoebe?
Would you agree that atmosphere is the dominant element in the story? Is a supernatural story likely to be one of atmosphere? Why?
Study the way in which the author has made vivid the picture of the Reifsneider home. Observe the skill with which he has contrasted the dull, even sordid, realism of the actual setting with the beauty of Henry’s visions. Why should the final one be the most beautiful? What color words do you find? How does color, or lack of it, aid in the unified effect?
Read Mr. Dreiser’s “Free” (see volume bearing this title) and compare it with “The Lost Phoebe.” Which do you regard as the more significant story?