“uness we hear to the contrary” to unless.
“Love surely was so triumpahnt” to triumphant.
[Chapter XV]
“was not due at Windmere till seven” to Windermere.
“while she poor girl would have to bear all the brunt” to the.
[Chapter XVI]
“with as brace a face and bearing as she could muster” to brave.
[Chapter XVIII]
“he determind to try to make amends” to determined.
(“Why, madam ‘why’” he almost roared whilst...) Change the passage in quotes to an exclamation (because of the roaring).