| CHARACTERS | |
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| Changed: Schneider [do. do.] | |
| To: Schneider German sergeant |
| Chapter 1 | |
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| Changed: “This Saka—Saka”—[Zu] Pfeiffer glanced at | |
| To: “This Saka—Saka”—zu Pfeiffer glanced at |
| Chapter 1 | |
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| Changed: retreat. At [MFunga] MPopo’s is the | |
| To: retreat. At MFunya MPopo’s is the |
| Chapter 1 | |
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| Changed: As [Zu] Pfeiffer nodded languidly | |
| To: As zu Pfeiffer nodded languidly |
| Chapter 1 | |
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| Changed: seemed to escape [Zu] Pfeiffer. He gave | |
| To: seemed to escape zu Pfeiffer. He gave |
| Chapter 1 | |
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| Changed: man’s arrival?” demanded [Zu] Pfeiffer harshly. | |
| To: man’s arrival?” demanded zu Pfeiffer harshly. |
| Chapter 1 | |
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| Changed: Zu [Peiffer] finished the report leisurely | |
| To: Zu Pfeiffer finished the report leisurely |
| Chapter 3 | |
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| Changed: I thank you[,] And if—— Were | |
| To: I thank you. And if—— Were |
| Chapter 6 | |
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| Changed: as balanced as a dancer’s | |
| To: as balanced as a dancer’s. |
| Chapter 6 | |
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| Changed: to matters of more importance.[”] | |
| To: to matters of more importance. |