Other changes to the original text are listed as follows:
- Page 2 Man-made/Man-Made: The Man-Made World
- Page 9 Jessie/Josie: Miss Josie, the thin
- Page 28 her/his: face between his hands
- Page 45 evclaimed/exclaimed: exclaimed his wife
- Page 110 Removed repeated word a: were a real
- Page 115 who/why: why his hair's
- Page 134 though/thought: I thought as much
- Page 164 Mr./My: My dear Miss
- Page 169 Removed repeated word and: her own and set it
- Page 174 removed redundant word a: he had not had
- Page 194 though/thought: I thought I heard
- Page 197 litle/little: a little dampened
- Page 240 weedings/weddings: wooings and weddings
- Page 260 irrestible/irresistible: irresistible from self-enforced
- Page 261 Cottonwood/Cottonwoods: to The Cottonwoods
- Page 285 busband/husband: live with her husband
- Page 317 massages/messages: its messages are not only