seemed > [it seemed]
6 But with his raging arms he rudely flashed
rudely > violently, clumsily flashed > splashed
7 The waves about, and all his armour swept, 8 That all the blood and filth away was washed,
That > [So that]
9 Yet still he beat the water, and the billows dashed.
still > still, yet; continually
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Atin drew nigh, to weet what it mote bee;
2 For much he wondred at that vncouth sight;
Whom should he, but his owne deare Lord, there see,
4 His owne deare Lord Pyrochles, in sad plight,
Readie to drowne himselfe for fell despight.
6 Harrow now out, and well away, he cryde,
What dismall day hath lent +this+ cursed light,
8 To see my Lord so deadly +damnifyde?+
Pyrochles, {o^} Pyrochles, what is thee betyde?
7 this > but this his 1590 8 damnifyde? > damnifyde 1590, 1596