6 There, when they rested had a season due,

a season due > for a fitting period

7 They her besought of favour special,

her besought of favour special > [asked her for special favour, asked her as a special favour]

8 Of that fair castle to afford them view; 9 She granted and, them leading forth, the same did show.

209.21

First she +them+ led vp to the Castle wall,
2 That was so high, as foe might not it clime,
And all so faire, and +fensible+ withall,
4 Not built of bricke, ne yet of stone and lime,
But of thing like to that AEgyptian slime,
6 Whereof king Nine whilome built Babell towre;
But {o^} great pitty, that no lenger time
8 So goodly workemanship should not endure:
Soone it must turne to earth; no earthly thing is sure.

1 them > him 1590 3 fensible > sensible 1596, 1609

1 First she them led up to the castle wall, 2 That was so high as foe might not it climb,

as > [that a]