remorse > pity, compunction
8 Nor stirred, till hope of life did him forsake; 9 So end of that carl's days, and his own pains, did make.
carl > villain, churl pains > efforts; pains
211.47
Which when those wicked Hags from farre did spy,
2 Like two mad dogs they ran about the lands,
And th'one of them with dreadfull yelling cry,
4 Throwing away her broken chaines and bands,
And hauing quencht her burning fier brands,
6 Hedlong her selfe did cast into that lake;
But Impotence with her owne wilfull hands,
8 One of Malegers cursed darts did take,
So riu'd her trembling hart, and wicked end did make.
1 Which when those wicked hags from far did spy, 2 Like two mad dogs they ran about the lands, 3 And one of them with dreadful yelling cry,
one of them > (Impatience - see line 7)
4 Throwing away her broken chains and bonds,
her broken chains > (Apparently an error: it was Impotence whom Arthur bound, or tried to bind, at 211.28:6)
5 And having quenched her burning fire brands, 6 Headlong herself did cast into that lake; 7 But Impotence with her own wilful hands 8 One of Maleger's cursed darts did take, 9 So rived her trembling heart, and wicked end did make.