thrilled > pierced

8 Frail hearts, yet quenched not; like starry light

Frail > {Frail; morally weak, unable to resist temptation; tender (last is SUS)} quenched > destroyed, killed

9 Which, sparkling on the silent waves, does seem more bright.

bright > bright; beautiful

212.79

The young man sleeping by her, seemd to bee
2 Some goodly swayne of honorable place,
That certes it great pittie was to see
4 Him his nobilitie so foule deface;
A sweet regard, and amiable grace,
6 Mixed with manly sternnesse did appeare
Yet sleeping, in his well proportiond face,
8 And on his tender lips the downy heare
Did now but freshly spring, and silken blossomes beare.

1 The young man sleeping by her seemed to be 2 Some goodly swain of honourable place,

goodly > well-favoured; fine swain > youth; lover place > social station

3 That certes it great pity was to see