her watery sisters > [the other nereids]
8 Gathering sweet daffodils, to have made 9 Gay garlands, from the sun their foreheads fair to shade)
304.30
Eftsoones both flowres and girlonds farre away
2 She flong, and her faire deawy lockes yrent,
To sorrow huge she turnd her former play,
4 And +gamesom+ merth to grieuous dreriment:
She threw her selfe downe on the Continent,
6 Ne word did speake, but lay as in a swowne,
Whiles all her sisters did for her lament,
8 With yelling outcries, and with shrieking sowne;
And euery one did teare her girlond from her crowne.
4 gamesom > gameson 1590, 1596
1 Eftsoons both flowers and garlands far away
Eftsoons > Forthwith
2 She flung, and her fair dewy locks rent.
rent > tore
3 To sorrow huge she turned her former play, 4 And gamesome mirth to grievous dreariment: