5 Or looseness, that she lightly did remove.

that > [in that] remove > [remove her love from Marinell]

6 Most virtuous virgin, glory be your meed,

meed > reward

7 And crown of heavenly praise with saints above, 8 Where most sweet hymns of this your famous deed 9 Are still amongst them sung, that far my rhymes exceed.

exceed > surpass

308.43

Fit song of Angels caroled to bee;
2 But yet what so my feeble Muse can frame,
Shall be t'aduance thy goodly chastitee,
4 And to enroll thy memorable name,
In th'heart of euery honourable Dame,
6 That they thy vertuous deedes may imitate,
And be partakers of thy endlesse fame.
8 It yrkes me, leaue thee in this wofull state,
To tell of Satyrane, where I him left of late.

1 Fit song of angels carolled to be;

of > by carolled > sung