1 Soon as the cruel flames slaked were,

Soon > [As soon]

2 Malbecco, seeing how his loss did lie, 3 Out of the flames, which he had quenched whilere,

whilere > erewhile: a while before

4 Into huge waves of grief and jealousy 5 Full deep implunged was, and drowned nigh,

Full > Very implunged > plunged into (the prefix is here tautological, and thus intensive)

6 'Twixt inward dole and felonous despite;

dole > grief, sorrow felonous > {Cruel, wicked, befitting a felon} despite > malice; rage

7 He raved, he wept, he stamped, he loud did cry, 8 And all the passions that in man may light

light > be incident; hence: occur