8 gyrlond > garlond 1590
1 So loved you the lusty Hyacinth,
So > Thus lusty > pleasing; lustful; insolent, self-confident
2 So loved you the fair Coronis dear:
Coronis > (Daughter of Phlegyas, and mother by Apollo of Aesculapius; see Met. 2.542-632) dear > dear (qualifying Coronis); dearly
3 Yet both are of your hapless hand extinct,
of > by extinct > dead
4 Yet both in flowers do live, and love you bear, 5 The one a pansy, the other a sweet-brier:
the other a sweet-brier > (This detail is not in Ovid)
6 For grief whereof you might have lively seen