Hereof > Of this unweeting > ignorant

2 And, lying down upon the sandy grail,

grail > gravel

3 Drank of the stream, as clear as crystal glass; 4 Eftsoons his manly forces began to fail,

Eftsoons > Thereupon, forthwith manly > {Pertaining to human beings; also: manly, in the modern sense}

5 And mighty strong was turned to feeble frail. 6 His changed powers at first themselves not felt,

not > [were not]

7 Till curdled cold his courage can assail,

can > did

8 And cheerful blood in faintness chill did melt,