7 So shook he, that horror was to hear,
was > [it was]
8 For as the clashing of an armour bright, 9 Such noise his roused scales did send to the knight.
111.10
His flaggy wings when forth he did display,
2 Were like two sayles, in which the hollow wynd
Is gathered full, and worketh speedy way:
4 And eke the pennes, that did his pineons +bynd,+
Were like mayne-yardes, with flying canuas lynd,
6 With which whenas him list the ayre to beat,
And there by force vnwonted passage find,
8 The cloudes before him fled for terrour great,
And all the heauens stood still amazed with his threat.
4 bynd, > bynd 1596
1 His flaggy wings, when forth he did display,
flaggy > drooping display > spread [them]; or: exhibit himself ostentatiously (cf. King Lear II iv 40)
2 Were like two sails, in which the hollow wind 3 Is gathered full, and works speedy way: 4 And eke the pens, that did his pinions bind,
eke > also pens > feathers (here = wing-coverts) pinions > flight-feathers (primaries and secondaries)