4 His ruddy lips did smile, and rosy red 5 Did paint his cheerful cheeks, yet being dead:
yet > although
6 Seemed to have been a goodly personage,
Seemed > [He seemed] goodly > well-favoured, handsome
7 Now in his freshest flower of lustihead,
lustihead > lustiness, vigour; lustfulness
8 Fit to inflame fair lady with love's rage, 9 But that fierce fate did crop the blossom of his age.
201.42
Whom when the good Sir Guyon did behold,
2 His hart gan wexe as starke, as marble stone,
And his fresh bloud did frieze with fearefull cold,
4 That all his senses seemd bereft +attone:+
At last his mightie ghost gan deepe to grone,
6 As Lyon grudging in his great disdaine,
Mournes inwardly, and makes to himselfe mone;
8 Till ruth and fraile affection did +constraine,+
His +stout courage+ to stoupe, and shew his inward paine.
4 attone: > attone, 1596 8 constraine, > constraine 1609 9 stout courage > courage stout 1609