Hyphen added: "dust-storms" (p. 175), "far-away" (p. 146), "re-named" (p. 97), "saw-mill" (p. 277), "water-falls" (p. 278).
The following words appear both with and without hyphens and have not been changed: "cliff-side", "lime-stone", "mid-stream", "nick-named", "out-distanced", "rail-head", "sea-sick", "war-path".
P. 23: "Um-ul-Tabul" changed to "Um-al-Tabul".
P. 34: duplicate "in" removed (to where I was in the trenches).
Pp. 46, 53: "Essinn" and "Es-sin" changed to "Essin".
P. 57: "packal" might be a typo for the old word "packald" or the word "pack" but has been left unchanged.
P. 93: added "a" (in a successful operation).
P. 98: "blurr" changed to "blur" (the only blur on the silvery brightness).
P. 99: "entritis" changed to "enteritis" (the increasing cases of enteritis).
P. 172: "abominally" changed to "abominably (treated our men abominably).