[Chapter I]
Change “whisperedK ate, glancing towards the dozing French” to whispered Kate.
“Godwin, and Harvey—yes, and Rees too, whatever Marion” to Hervey.
“given up, for its draughtiness, to the bat and the mice” to bats.
“briefly described where and how she had found hlm” to him.
[Chapter II]
“mile of the castle that he did’nt know, they said” to didn’t.
[Chapter IV]
“The fact was that Amos Gooodhare, having devoted” to Goodhare.
[Chapter V]