Change “and straggling briers, nntil, pushing aside” to until.
[Chapter II]
“too far for their ‘yonng men’ in the town to come” to young.
“must have been specialy hard to bear with patience” to specially.
[Chapter V]
(And why had the stranger spoken of Tom Parkes as “Jim”) add question mark to sentence.
[Chapter VI]
“to bring out a volume of poety or a novel” to poetry.
“another laddder was placed against another window” to ladder.
(I always put down “Robin Hood” in confessoin-books as) to confession.