Why, sir. Is anything wrong?"
changed to: Why, [sir?] Is anything wrong?"
Chapter VI
Dora will bring me some dinner," she said,
changed to: [Nora] will bring me some dinner," she said,
She has become a sort of public character."
changed to: She has become a sort of public [character.]
Chapter VII
Duvall turned to his companion with a juzzled frown.
changed to: Duvall turned to his companion with a [puzzled] frown.