...sent him into the drag store in order that she...
changed to: ...sent him into the [drug] store in order that she...
...provided the card is, as I conclude, torn exactly in half.
changed to: ...provided the card is, as I conclude, torn exactly in [half."]
...begins with 'Mar,' Duvall said. I will put them down on a sheet of paper."
changed to: ...begins with ['Mar,'" Duvall said. "I] will put them down on a sheet of paper."
It may be that Miss Marcia Ford,...
changed to: ["It] may be that Miss Marcia Ford,...
...extended a half sheet of none-paper toward the detective.
changed to: ...extended a half sheet of [note-paper] toward the detective.