changed to: ...in case anyone questioned him about [me.]
She gave him a name and address.
changed to: ["She] gave him a name and address.
Chapter XV
"Yes. I came to see you about a matter of importance.
changed to: "Yes. I came to see you about a matter of [importance."]
Chapter XVI
...been following appeared, wearing a flowered kimona.
changed to: ...been following appeared, wearing a flowered [kimono.]
Chapter XVII