"'Is there anything more you want of us?" Miss Norman asked,
changed to: ["Is] there anything more you want of us?" Miss Norman asked,
Chapter XX
"I am glad to find you almost yourself again.
changed to: "I am glad to find you almost yourself [again."]
Chapter XXI
It seems she haunted the studio for several weeks without...
changed to: ["It] seems she haunted the studio for several weeks without...
...and thus learned by name and address.
changed to: and thus learned [my] name and address.