Wrong. The Navajoes have large herds of cattle, also many fine horses.
Right. The Navajoes have large herds of cattle and many fine horses.
Revise. The pitcher made a home run, also two singles.
382. Join co-ordinate main clauses with a conjunction, and, but, for, or or nor; or make one clause subordinate. Such words as so, then, therefore, and also are not conjunctions.
Wrong. I have no favorite kinds of books, however, I do read a great deal.
Right. I have no favorite kinds of books, but I do read a great deal.
Wrong. I had to run to supper both nights so I decided I would quit.
Right. After I had had to run to supper both nights I decided I would quit.
Revise. Before school and on Saturdays I worked either in a restaurant or in a clothing store, so my reading has been limited for the last two years.