Revise. During my senior year I had some experience in dramatics by taking part in the class play.
369. Use a predicated noun rather than a predicated clause beginning with when or where.
Wrong. A B.A. is where you are graduated in a liberal arts course.
Right. A B.A. is a degree given to graduates of a liberal arts course.
Revise. Golf is where you try to get the ball into the hole in the fewest possible number of strokes.
370. Use that to introduce a predicated clause of reason.
Wrong. The reason I have not read more is due to the fact that I have had no time.
Right. The reason I have not read more is that I have had no time.
Revise. My reason for reading this book was because I had previously seen the same story in the movies.