l. 10. for mourner read Weeper. (D.)
instead of ll. 11–5:
My faults forgiving, sharing in my Joy,
A frank, sincere, engaging, generous Boy!
My Friend in pleasures of the passing Day,
Mine in Disputes as transient as they,
Each other’s Champion, never sought the Cause. (D.)
l. 13: At School each other’s prompter, and at play.
instead of ll. 21–2:
And made that first Impression on my breast