“the shrill, eldritch laughter of the hag Sarah Carew” to Carewe.
[Chapter XVI]
“Stephen’s hawk-eyes to distinguish anything Stopping still” add period after anything.
[Chapter XVII]
“He did not even see Dakin in attendancce as his pale face” to attendance.
“could hardly refrain from a little cry of admiraton” to admiration.
“to whisper and mumble the necessary reponses in the service” to responses.
[Chapter XVIII]
(“Handsome is as handsome does,” persisted the old old gentleman) delete one old.
(“Tis some trick of old Sarah’s,” he kept on repeating) to ’Tis.