CHAPTER I
Changed: ever walked in [fairy tale]. But she saw
To: ever walked in fairy-tale. But she saw
CHAPTER III
Changed: before, but covered [wth] confusion and shame,
To: before, but covered with confusion and shame,
CHAPTER III
Changed: and she turned [delberately], one dainty, slippered
To: and she turned deliberately, one dainty, slippered
CHAPTER V
Changed: her that this [wholsale] disposal of Marcia
To: her that this wholesale disposal of Marcia
CHAPTER V
Changed: Phoebe takes your place and then come back.
To: Phoebe takes your place and then come back.”
CHAPTER V
Changed: fine places, to [tea drinkings] and the like,
To: fine places, to tea-drinkings and the like,
CHAPTER VI
Changed: out radiant and [childlike] through her tears.
To: out radiant and child-like through her tears.
CHAPTER X
Changed: was always something [childlike] about Marcia’s
To: was always something child-like about Marcia’s
CHAPTER X
Changed: her old home [plentfully] supplied with those
To: her old home plentifully supplied with those
CHAPTER XII
Changed: got David that’s worth everything.
To: got David that’s worth everything.”