"I just noticed the strangest thing about you," she said. "You're the first person I've ever seen who had different colored eyes!"
Wilbur gasped. His knees felt weak, and out of the past he heard a creaky voice say, "... I can't tell them apart." Now he understood that Arthur's right eye had been the last ingredient in the Elixir of Fortitude!
Wilbur smiled. There was nothing to be angry about. He certainly hadn't got the worst of the bargain! His shoulders were squared as he helped Miss Burnett into the elevator car.
"Let's go, Jean," Wilbur said.
- Changed "widow" to "window" (A fat grey cat sunned itself on the window ledge)
- Removed extra "and" (He picked up the glass ball again and Wilbur felt himself grow faint)
- Changed "is it" to "it is" ("Excalibur it is called," Merlin said.)
- Changed "face" to "fact" (In fact, there was no card at all!)
- Changed "handkershief" to "handkerchief" (Wilbur pulled out his handkerchief and wiped his right eye)
- Removed extraneous doublequote at the end of the sentence (Arthur's right eye had been the last ingredient in the Elixir of Fortitude!)