In Chapter XVI, a quotation mark was added after Last night the water was on the thumb.
In Chapter XVII, a missing quotation mark was added after "Well, and before he said, "it isn't the usual view, and a missing quotation mark was added after The trouble is, I don't quite know where I'm going to get it..
In Chapter XIX, admissable now and then was changed to admissible now and then, he recognised thath she must be forced was changed to he recognised that she must be forced, the girls' big blue eyes was changed to the girl's big blue eyes, and a missing quotation mark was added before Couldn't you get there in the Estremedura.
In Chapter XX, a missing quotation mark was added after "Well, and before said Muriel, "it is really your own fault, a quotation mark was deleted before Eight guineas for the two, and a period was changed to a question mark after the Delgado Island lies.
In Chapter XXI, That, I think, is, to be acurate was changed to That, I think, is, to be accurate.
In Chapter XXII, one of the Canorios raised himself a trifle was changed to one of the Canorios raised himself a trifle, and a quotation mark was deleted after not afraid of Funnel-paint.
In Chapter XXIII, a quotation mark was added after makes any exertion out of the question, a quotation mark was deleted before Offer any of the rest of them, and clenched a hard, scared fist was changed to clenched a hard, scarred fist.
In Chapter XXIV, even Jefferson deferrd to him was changed to even Jefferson deferrd to him, as the Cumbria rose upright was changed to as the Cumbria rose upright, In a month her deck was almost leved was changed to In a month her deck was almost leveled, You will remember the encouraging words that fellow left—"My arm's almost rotten now." was changed to You will remember the encouraging words that fellow left—'My arm's almost rotten now.'", and slowly clenched one scared hand was changed to slowly clenched one scarred hand.
In Chapter XXV, he keeps in the litle case was changed to he keeps in the little case, beam and angle comenced to tremble was changed to beam and angle commenced to tremble, and Wire and hemp and studded chain rosed was changed to Wire and hemp and studded chain rose.
In Chapter XXVI, a missing question mark was added after Put that lamp out., keep outside the straking radius was changed to keep outside the striking radius, Austim became sensible of a change in his mood was changed to Austin became sensible of a change in his mood, and a faint rythmic throbbing was changed to a faint rhythmic throbbing.