In Chapter III, "a composure which astonished be" was changed to "a composure which astonished me", and "he was bent in discharging his duty" was changed to "he was bent on discharging his duty".
In Chapter VII, "Becaues he'd gone" was changed to "Because he'd gone", and a mismatched quotation mark was corrected after "Still, you might have been a little more civil, Sally."
In Chapter VIII, "it occured to me that Lucille Haldane" was changed to "it occurred to me that Lucille Haldane".
In Chapter IX, "every available dollar for the approaching stuggle" was changed to "every available dollar for the approaching struggle".
In Chapter X, a mismatched quotation mark was corrected before "'Twoinette's so—so blamed systematic".
In Chapter XI, "while I draged at the halliards" was changed to "while I dragged at the halliards", "life your hands at once" was changed to "lift your hands at once", "several dark figures on the varanda" was changed to "several dark figures on the veranda", and "the shock of her kneel upon the bottom" was changed to "the shock of her keel upon the bottom".
In Chapter XII, "you have won lands down" was changed to "you have won hands down".
In Chapter XV, "a little worse than he rest" was changed to "a little worse than the rest".
In Chapter XVI, "the time for open resistance had come a last" was changed to "the time for open resistance had come at last", a missing period was added after "who watched our efforts with much approval", and "the memory of former wongs" was changed to "the memory of former wrongs".
In Chapter XVII, "snatching here hand away" was changed to "snatching her hand away".