[Page 193]: Was 'Bethrothal' (Till death us do join past parting—that sounds like Betrothal indeed!)
[Page 200]: Was 'canonade' (Such a castle seldom crumbles by sheer stress of cannonade: 'Tis when foes are foiled and fighting's finished that vile rains invade)
[Page 203]: Inserted stanza (Down I sat to cards, one evening)
[Page 203]: Added starting quote ("When he found his voice, he stammered 'That expression once again!')
[Page 204]: Added starting quote ('End it! no time like the present!)
[Page 224]: Changed comma to period (the morning's lessons conned with the tutor. There, too, it was that he impressed on the lad those maxims)
[Page 236]: Added end quote (Why, he makes sure of her—"do you say, yes"— "She'll not say, no,"—what comes it to beside?)
[Page 265]: Added stanza ("'I've been about those laces we need for ... never mind!)
[Page 266]: Keeping original spelling (With dreriment about, within may life be found)
[Page 267]: Added stanza ("'Wicked dear Husband, first despair and then rejoice!)