The Return of Tharn

by Howard Browne

• Part I, page 42: Neels > Neela: 'Neela, the zebra'.
• Part I, page 46: along > alone: 'required courage to venture alone into the forest'.
• Part I, page 50: squarly > squarely: 'struck the infuriated boy squarely in the face'.
• Part I, page 51: bobing > bobbing: 'weaving, bobbing sensation'.
• Part I, page 52: largly > largely: 'anger was largely responsible'. . > ,: 'I have never slept in a tree," he laughed uncertainly'.
• Part I, page 53: discernable > discernible: 'faintly discernible'.
• Part I, page 55: . > ,: 'fifty men there, some of them tending'.
• Part I, page 56: inserted ,: '"Sadu is hungry too," one of the girls observed'.
• Part I, page 57: inserted .: 'sound of Sadu's roar.'
• Part I, page 58: inserted - after Be: 'God-Whose-Name-May-Not-Be-Spoken-Aloud'.
• Part I, page 60: occured > occurred: 'then there occurred'. mightly > mighty: 'rose in a mighty leap'. sewing > sowing: 'sowing death among the ranks'. Jaton's > Jotan's: 'Jotan's rescue'.
• Part I, page 61: affect > effect: 'beginning to take effect on the disorganised warriors'. casualities > casualties: 'result in further casualties'. ' > ": 'into those shadows"'.
• Part I, page 62: inserted ": '"When morning comes'.
• Part II, page 67: brough > brought: 'the hours brought a fresh flood of curses'. inserted .: 'to his lips.' inserted .: 'Here.'
• Part II, page 68: inserted .: 'in his movements and expression.' inserted .: 'bring us wine.'
• Part II, page 69: inserted - after May: 'God-Whose-Name-May-Not-Be-Spoken-Aloud'.
• Part II, page 73: continous > continuous: 'in one continuous motion.'
• Part II, page 74: removed duplicate .: 'in his direction.'
• Part II, page 76: hundreth > hundredth: 'for the hundredth time'.
• Part II, page 78: 'Trakor admitted sheepishly. "But I heard' > 'Trakor admitted sheepishly, "but I heard'.
• Part II, page 79, 110 and 111: '- - -' in text changed to '----'.
• Part II, page 80: Rokut's > Bokut's: 'He closed the door on Bokut's unrelieved expression'. sandles > sandals: 'strings of his sandals'.
• Part II, page 81: startingly > startlingly: 'almost startlingly handsome'.
• Part II, page 83: inserted ,: 'glazed with pain, his'.
• Part II, page 84: . > ?: 'faded blue eyes?'. inserted ": '"And if I persist'.
• Part II, page 90: inprints > imprints: 'imprints left by its feet.' speciman > specimen: 'specimen of perfect manhood'. worshipping > worshiping: 'hero-worshiping'.
• Part II, page 91: marvelling > marveling: 'marveling at the change'.
• Part II, page 94: inserted his: 'face with his own sleeping furs'.
• Part II, page 95: inserted .: 'digested this information quickly.'
• Part II, page 97: . > ?: 'But do you have the right to sacrifice the lives of the rest of us in a quest that is completely hopeless?'
• Part II, page 99: inserted .: 'this time toward home.' trodding > treading: 'treading on snakes'.
• Part II, page 100: worshipping > worshiping: 'his worshiping companion'.
• Part II, page 103: wais > waist: 'waist-high'.
• Part II, page 105: cacaphony > cacophony: 'the cacophony of roars'.
• Part II, page 106: inserted it: 'what is it, Tharn?'
• Part II, page 107: inserted .: 'chattering of many voices.' sinous > sinuous: 'long sinuous limb'.
• Part II, page 108: thrist > thirst: 'pangs of thirst'.
• Part II, page 109: contructed > constructed: 'the hut was constructed'. nut > hut: 'this hut was practically ringed with patrolling sentries'. inserted ,: 'once it gave, the structure'.
• Part II, page 110: sickenly > sickeningly: 'hut lurched sickeningly,'.
• Part III, page 98: marvelling > marveling: 'marveling at her beauty'.
• Part III, page 99: forcast > forecast: 'the storm Tharn had forecast,'. excitment > excitement: 'it was the only excitement'.
• Part III, page 102: marvelled > marveled: 'she marveled at how little'. then > there: 'Here and there'.
• Part III, page 103: an > any: 'at any moment'.
• Part III, page 104: Trakors > Trakor's: 'in Trakor's heart.' wariors > warriors: 'traders, warriors,'.
• Part III, page 105: Ammad' to Ammad's: 'Ammad's noblemen'. boundry > boundary: 'a boundary dispute'.
• Part III, page 106: boundry > boundary: 'the boundary line'.
• Part III, page 108: similiar > similar: 'a similar distinction,'. ' > ": 'so easily."' drily > dryly: 'Curzad commented dryly'.
• Part III, page 109: inserted have: 'Tharn would have unhesitatingly charged'. inpulsive > impulsive: 'the impulsive act'. coud > could: 'he could see'. magnificience > magnificence: 'greater size and magnificence,'. worshipping > worshiping: 'hero-worshiping'.
• Part III, page 110: this > his: 'about his shoulders'.
• Part III, page 111: thing > think: 'think I decided'. I"ll > I'll: 'Tell him I'll be out'.
• Part III, page 112: hestitated > hesitated: 'He hesitated.' forseen > foreseen: 'we had not foreseen,'. speciman > specimen: 'remarkable physical specimen'.
• Part III, page 113: amendable > amenable: 'make him amenable.' girls > girl: 'about a wild girl of the caves?'
• Part III, page 114: reconnaisance > reconnaissance: 'general reconnaissance'. retract > retrace: 'retrace his steps'.
• Part III, page 116: hand-and > hand- and: 'hand- and foot-holds'. threshed > thrashed: 'thrashed and bucked.'
• Part III, page 117: impromtu > impromptu: 'Dylara's impromptu club,'.
• Part III, page 119: inserted .: 'face the monarch.'
• Part III, page 120: inserted - after Whose: 'God-Whose-Name-May-Not-Be-Spoken-Aloud'.
• Part III, page 121: beastial > bestial: 'the bestial snarls'.
• Part III, page 122: guage > gauge: 'chance to gauge'.
• Part III, page 123: inserted .: 'heavy with jungle blooms.'
• Part III, page 124: . > ,: '"At once, Most-High."' quited > quitted: 'only just quitted.' though > through: 'to peer through.'
• Part III, page 127: it is > is it: 'Who is it?"'.
• Part III, page 128: Sephar > Ammad: 'sleeping Ammad'.
• Part III, page 130: inserted .: 'of the door.' minature > miniature: 'the miniature torch'.
• Part III, page 131: inserted the: 'at the sound'. occured > occurred: 'what had occurred'.
• Part III, page 132: than > that: 'corridor that ran past'. coridor > corridor: 'down the corridor a man'. pasing > passing: 'passing others quickly.'
• Part III, page 133: sizeable > sizable: 'a sizable group'.
• Part III, page 134: many > few: there are too few men'. level > levels: 'lower three levels'.
• Part III, page 135: rapidily > rapidly: 'fleeing rapidly'.
• Part III, page 137: sing > sign: 'sign of life'. excitment > excitement: 'after the excitement'.
• Part III, page 138 and 139: missle > missile
• Part III, page 141: weighed > weighted: 'moment of weighted silence'. preocupation > preoccupation: 'Jotan's studied preoccupation,'. sunflecked > sun-flecked. and > had: 'a soft hand had placed itself'.

All dialogue has closing quotation marks regardless of whether it continues on the subsequent paragraph.