15. [it will be better for us] for we had better accept this kind offer
16. he erased before [turned]
18. [in order] added above line
21. [rise to] added above line
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3. [home] added above line
5. [my] for the
9. [itself] added above line
11. [the favourite spot] for the most favourite
13. favourite erased before [coast]