5. [calling] for called
7. [not] added above line
9. [all the] over great erased
10. [which] is left ‘hanging’
15. [a] added above line before spy
17. [persuaded] for induced
18. [for the rest of her stay] added above line after home and erased after offer
20. [a] added above line before very
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3. [beyond her expectation] over were erased