17. I hope erased after [satisfied]
19. [& says] added above line
21. out of erased before [left]
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3. [He pretends to advise ... Improvements] added between lines
7. [of & to us, all] for of his eldest Br—& to his Eldest Br &
8. [Most Families ... to say anything] for A young Man of Abilities & Address, & general ease of manner Miss H.— who says anything
12. [In ours, it is Sidney; who is a] over Sidney is erased
14. [and with great powers ... only fault] for very lively, very pleasant—living very much in the World—& liked by every body
16. I wish we may (I should above line, erased) erased before [He is here]