6. [her inner room] for the little inner parlour

7. [Employment] for something better to do

14. such as these erased after [than]

16. [Brown] for Henderson

17. M erased before [Lieut:]

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1. [the List was not only] for it was not only a List

7. [were an ever-ready consolation] for was an ever-present source of Joy

8. [without delay] for immediately

15. with all becoming alacrity erased after [List]