5. immediately erased after [arm]
6. [felt (herself doing erased) that any notice from her was an Honour] over had been long used to consider her honour (sic) by any Notice she bestowed erased
9. [or a natural] for & a
17. [every way] added above line
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5. [with me] added above line
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3. [find fault with] for rip up the faults of
4. [Nobody could live happier together than us] for We lived perfectly happy together
12. [Charlottes] for her