8. [had just passed through Charlotte’s (brain erased) mind (and collecting her Thoughts, she replied—“I dare say I look surprised, for I feel so erased)]—all written over but she could only give one explanation of the Amazement which she cd easily beleive to be painted in her face erased
11. [do] added above line before look
13. [what Invalides ... are] for that both you & your Sister are sad sufferers (Invalides above line) as to Health
16. [appellation] for name
22. which will erased before [incline]
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1. Howe (?) erased before [The World]
4. [not] for act
5. [no opportunity of (doing erased) being useful (Good erased) escape them] for none of their faculties be wasted