5. [walk] for take
12. [as to] for in
13. [the Hill is so steep] for there is such a steep Hill to get up to it
18. which erased after [Perspiration]
21. th erased before [veiwed]
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5. Pot erased after [Cocoa]
13. [brought up] added above line
16. [the murmuring of a few broken sentences of self-approbation & success] for in a faint murmur, & a few broken sentences of approbation of his own Doings & prosperity
19. [into as gallant a Line as ever] for with quite as much Gallantry as before