6 Whilst ... love] Since ... loves Walton
10 to die, 1635: to die. 1639-54: to dy. 1669
12 theire S96: those 1635-69
18 Gibraltare, 1635-54: Gabraltare, 1669: Gibraltar? 1719, Chambers: Gibraltar are Grosart. See note
19 but streights, Ed: but streights 1635-69
24 first] sist 1669
28 others souls] other souls Walton and S96
30 That, he may raise; therefore, Walton